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Cue Mortimer

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Doodles of first time I think I'd bring Mortimer into the verse.

These two doodles actually got my brain inspired to write a summary of the scene:

Mickey has come to want to start following his darling Minnie around outside the Mansion, since he misses her while she's gone. Luckily, as a ghost, he can do this while invisible! This can prove a problem for Minnie sometimes, since all he wants to do is either cling to her and make sweet talk, or explore. Both of which can involve Minnie talking to the "air" and trying to stop the mouse from revieling himself.

Since Mickey has been there for her walk from school back to the Mansion[to make sure he gets back], one of these walks includes Mickey's first time seeing Mortimer, and seeing how he acts to Minnie.

First time seeing Mortimer interact with minnie: Mickey seeths with sudden hate.
Minnie was his. His, his, HIS. Who did this rodent think he was? Taking all these advances with her? The mouse ghost wasn't having any of that.

When asking Minnie about it, she said she just ignores his now, since past attempts to tell him no never seemed to get through to him. Now she just didn't bother saying anything and let him ramble about whatever he wanted.
Mickey, however, wanted to get through to this rat that he didn't have any chance with his gal.

The next time Mortimer showed up, and Minnie rolled her eyes as we went on and on about how they should meet for a date [which she wouldn't show for], Mickey followed once again. This time, though, "Minnie" was gonna have a few words to say.
Mickey then takes possession of Minnie, confusing Mortimer to her sudden outburst of "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" and "GET OUT!"
In the next instant, Minnie's eyes changed, showing Mickey was now in control. [Mortimer probably sees them as new contact or something] Before Mortimer can make a full question, "Minnie" turns a glare at him, and goes off on how she never wants to see him again, how she dislikes his company, and how she's now seeing a much cute, handsomer, and charming mouse-- which causes a "what!" to escape from the mouse's mouth, which was quickly covered.
Mortimer, baffled by this bahavior, still tries to put on his "charm", saying Minnie should stop being so shy with him or some jibberish in his mind, because he was worth being around and blah blah blah. This is when "Minnie" shows even more hatred to the taller mouse not getting the hint. With an angry almost glow, Mickey's ghost side almost shows through from Minnie, as with each word of "I. Will. NEVER. Be. Your. GIRLFRIEND. GET THE POINT!" [or... something probably more clever], the mouse gets closer to Mortimer's face, also levetating to eye level before than stomping off.

Once as far from Mortimer as Minnie was allowing "Minnie" to go, she manges to kick Mickey out of her body, disoranted at first, than turning on the ghost to demand why he did that.



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And then my brain died... First nearly fully scene summary thingy I've been able to type up, so yay!
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